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[Robert's Weapon Tutorial]

Good visually, but not in depth enough

Firstly, your graphics were nice - it wasn't horrible to look at or navigate through like some tutorials submitted here.

The problem I found with it was that it wasn't particularly in depth. There were about 3 or 4 invariable steps for each weapon, which were:

1. Draw outline
2. Draw inner lines
3. Fill it in

This is all very well, but for a tutorial, you need more in the way of HOW to do these things. For example, when you say to draw the outlines of a handgun, you should put some of the distinguishing features between different makes and models of handguns.

Also, "The bit where you hold it" is generally referred to as a 'handle', just so you know for future reference.

All in all, it was good, but make the improvements I've suggested in order to provide a really useful tutorial for amateur artists.

[My New Grounds]

Good stuff

I really liked this, it's always nice to see a mixture of flash and video footage put together well. I liked the bit with the vote panel, where you were running your finger from one end to the other like a cursor, and also the bit where you had the face on your hand asking where you get your inspiration.

Pretty original all in all, I haven't seen any other HP-ad style parodies on NG. Deserves all the credit it has recieved. Added to favourites.

[TNAO:- The Beast P1]

Great

You artwork is beautiful, and this flash was very well made. I know you made a comment that you couldn't find a voice actor for the old man, but in some ways I think that worked nicely, although if you worked it from that angle, the main character would have to be silent as well.

I would suggest improving on the spelling and grammar in some of the subtitles, though, for example, 'you' instead of 'u', capitalising "I", etc. I feel it would just give it a tad more of a professional feel.

Other than that, it was very good, and I enjoyed it. Well done!

[Waterlollies]

Great job

Another masterpiece, Lord Adam Phillips. You continue to shock and amaze, in the best way possible. For the love of god, please don't stop.

[Theoden, Horsemaster]

Funny, but simplistic.

It was very funny, but the graphics were just images from the LOTR movie with moving mouths. Nevertheless, I found it amusing, and worth adding to my favourite submissions.

[TRACER episode 1]

Very nice.

This was a fantastic submission. I would recommend this to anybody who hasn't seen it. Well done.

[Splash Attack]

Good

The humour was great, although the graphics were simplistic at best, which was a slight irritation. Gave me a laugh or two though, so well done.

[Harry Potter INA]

Amusing

Firstly, some of the graphics were really good, for example the two girls. Other drawings were ok, but not AS good, for example Harry and Ron. Despite this, it was a very funny little cartoon, and a funny take on HP.

Nice work.

[Hungboo and Nolboo]

really good

considering you say that you're new to flash, this is fantastic. as a user who has been judging flash on this site for several years, i can honestly say that this submission is better than most that i have seen come through the portal. the graphics and animation were very nicely done, earned you big points in my books. this will definitely make it through te portal, and will be humbled if it doesn't win an award of some kind. really, really well done. keep using flash.

[Dad's at Work]

good lord

sheer brilliance. i loved "dad's home", and this is just the cherry on top of the cake. really good stuff, you've made my day!

if you don't continue to make flash it will be an enormous waste of your superb talent. well done!