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[Hamlet in 60 Seconds]

Pure, unadulterated brilliance.

Well done on this. I never really liked Shakespeare's plays throughout my study of English Lit, but this gave Hamlet an amusing twist. My favourite part of your version had to be the end, where everyone dies with a vague kind of 'oh well' feel. Fantastic.

[LightSaber Flash Tutorial]

Good, but needs more.

This was good - you obviously know your way around Flash. A few things I would say, however, is that lightsabers generally look much better with a straight blade with a rounded end, rather than an oval. Also, you should have spent more time on handle of the lightsaber, as I noticed the handle you added to yours looked rushed and not greatly detailed.

The general look of the flash was nice, as was the interaction, but the simplicity of the content of the actual tutorial let you down slightly. Otherwise, nice work.

[Burnt Face Man 5]

Classic Burnt Face Man

I really enjoyed this one, especially the bits with 'Have a nice day Man". An essential must-see. Added to favourites.

[Teddies Seasons Greeting]

Short but very nice

I know you said in your author comments that this was your first portal submission, but it can't be your very first, from the looks of it you have a fair amount of experience working with flash.

Anyway, as for the actual content - the graphics were very nice, and even though it was short it was a nice little christmas card style animation. Good job.

[Public Service Chef]

Good first try

For your first flash attempt this was really good. You're obviously a pretty talented artist, as all the graphics were done nicely. Obviously there's room for improvement, such as the sound quality and lip synching, and there could have been more animation, but I'm sure you'll learn all that as you progress with flash.

Keep at it, you have a lot of potential. And bear in mind that a lot of reviewers can be pretty harsh with what they say, so don't let negative reviews get you down.

Good job man.

[Gamer Tonight-Abused Sim]

Nice take on the Sims

I enjoyed the montage of apparent reality with the virtual character of the sim. I liked the way you used the Sims icons, like the relationship one with the minus sign when he was being insulted, etc. It was also effective how you used the Sims nonsensical language, and imposed a translation over it, like in interviews with foreigners on the news.

Good observational humour.

[Pork]

Amusing loop

It was good for a quick laugh, but I personally prefer the type of humour in Weebl & Bob stuff. Nicely animated, though, and the song was good.