Score: 8

"Amusing loop"

submission: Pork

date: December 15, 2007

It was good for a quick laugh, but I personally prefer the type of humour in Weebl & Bob stuff. Nicely animated, though, and the song was good.

Score: 5

"Good visually, but not in depth enough"

submission: Robert's Weapon Tutorial

date: December 15, 2007

Firstly, your graphics were nice - it wasn't horrible to look at or navigate through like some tutorials submitted here.

The problem I found with it was that it wasn't particularly in depth. There were about 3 or 4 invariable steps for each weapon, which were:

1. Draw outline
2. Draw inner lines
3. Fill it in

This is all very well, but for a tutorial, you need more in the way of HOW to do these things. For example, when you say to draw the outlines of a handgun, you should put some of the distinguishing features between different makes and models of handguns.

Also, "The bit where you hold it" is generally referred to as a 'handle', just so you know for future reference.

All in all, it was good, but make the improvements I've suggested in order to provide a really useful tutorial for amateur artists.

Score: 10

"Nice concept and a challenging game"

submission: Portal: The Flash Version

date: December 14, 2007

I like the fact that you have to use your brain a bit in this game. There are levels where I found myself becoming quite innovative in how I attempted to conquer the stage, which was nice. Definitely one to play more than once.

Score: 10

"Good stuff"

submission: My New Grounds

date: December 12, 2007

I really liked this, it's always nice to see a mixture of flash and video footage put together well. I liked the bit with the vote panel, where you were running your finger from one end to the other like a cursor, and also the bit where you had the face on your hand asking where you get your inspiration.

Pretty original all in all, I haven't seen any other HP-ad style parodies on NG. Deserves all the credit it has recieved. Added to favourites.

Score: 10

"Great"

submission: TNAO:- The Beast P1

date: December 9, 2007

You artwork is beautiful, and this flash was very well made. I know you made a comment that you couldn't find a voice actor for the old man, but in some ways I think that worked nicely, although if you worked it from that angle, the main character would have to be silent as well.

I would suggest improving on the spelling and grammar in some of the subtitles, though, for example, 'you' instead of 'u', capitalising "I", etc. I feel it would just give it a tad more of a professional feel.

Other than that, it was very good, and I enjoyed it. Well done!

Score: 10

"Great job"

submission: Waterlollies

date: November 10, 2007

Another masterpiece, Lord Adam Phillips. You continue to shock and amaze, in the best way possible. For the love of god, please don't stop.

Score: 7

"Funny, but simplistic."

submission: Theoden, Horsemaster

date: August 1, 2007

It was very funny, but the graphics were just images from the LOTR movie with moving mouths. Nevertheless, I found it amusing, and worth adding to my favourite submissions.

Score: 9

"Very nice."

submission: TRACER episode 1

date: July 30, 2007

This was a fantastic submission. I would recommend this to anybody who hasn't seen it. Well done.

Score: 7

"Good"

submission: Splash Attack

date: July 18, 2007

The humour was great, although the graphics were simplistic at best, which was a slight irritation. Gave me a laugh or two though, so well done.

Score: 8

"Amusing"

submission: Harry Potter INA

date: July 18, 2007

Firstly, some of the graphics were really good, for example the two girls. Other drawings were ok, but not AS good, for example Harry and Ron. Despite this, it was a very funny little cartoon, and a funny take on HP.

Nice work.