Score: 8

"Fun, and slightly challenging at times."

submission: The Visitor

date: July 5, 2008

I remember playing this ages ago when it was first uploaded here, but playing at again many months later, it's still an enjoyable game. It didn't take me as long to figure out how to complete certain sections of it, thankfully, but the bit in the kitchen still took a few minutes for me to work out.

Overall, the graphics were nice, and the point and click style worked very well. Probably one of the better point and click style games that I've played. Great work.

Score: 9

"Very fun little game"

submission: Music Catch

date: June 29, 2008

I enjoyed playing this. It was exactly right in terms of simplicity: easy to get to grips with, and not too much to have to think about whilst playing.

The only thing that was disappointing was how short it was! I could easily play this game all day, so I was a bit saddened when it came to an end. Perhaps if you were to do another one, you could make it with several levels, and bonus levels, etc.?

Anyway, great game, I'd love to see more.

Score: 8

"Great little short!"

submission: Cans

date: May 16, 2008

I enjoyed this. It was simple, but well-made, which is nice to see. A lot of the more simplistic animations on Newgrounds are only simple because of a lack of effort on the author's part, but you did a very nice job on this.

The music was really fitting to the animation, and it definitely benefited from it. I don't think there's much that you can actually improve on, as you seem to pretty much have this kind of animation pretty much down.

I'd love to see more of your work. Good job.

Score: 10

"Great - one of my favourites yet!"

submission: Pokemon Bahamut Version

date: April 19, 2008

Man, I really enjoyed this one. Using your own characters in the Pokémon game setting was a brilliant idea. I loved seeing Graham in the role of your nemesis, and the bit where you were fighting over the Pokémon to get the one that had the type advantage was hilarious! I would have liked to have seen that battle though - shame Graham was a 'fucking prick' and refused!

Score: 10

"Excellent."

submission: Nothing Really Matters

date: April 13, 2008

A very artistic and human interpretation of Bohemian Rhapsody. Aside from the fact that I love the song, I feel this animation captured the essence of it perfectly. The darkness surrounding most of the story was very effective in providing a sense of isolation, which I liked.

I especially liked the little scene at the end, which went back to the mother holding her son as a baby - returning to the age of innocence, so to speak.

Really great work, I'd definitely like to see more of this.

Score: 10

"Very nice work."

submission: Nipple Clamps.

date: March 25, 2008

You're really doing well with this type of flash, and this one was another great submission. I liked the weird abstract feel of the animation, and the way it didn't seem linear, but more like an animation which revolved around a certain concept.

I have some artwork which you might be interested in which is similar to the type of stuff you're doing now. I'll send it to you when I next come on MSN.

Score: 10

"Classic - A nice tribute to Tom and CC"

submission: Castle Crashing the Beard

date: March 24, 2008

I very much enjoyed this game, although it took me a few goes to notice the text along the bottom that said to hold down A for the magic. That helped once I knew to do that!

Anyway, the graphics and gameplay were both great, and the level-up thing was pretty cool. The voice clips were brilliant and very funny, and it's cool that Tom did them himself.

Overall, great game, and definitely one of my favorites of the year so far.

Score: 9

"Nicely executed."

submission: I love you.

date: March 11, 2008

As you know, I like the style you have going here. It kinda reminds me of David Firth a little bit, but less weird and more abstract.

I think you hit the nail on the head with this one - it seems to really represent the ambiguous complexity of love with a simplicity that is hard to achieve with words. (That's my view anyway :P).

Good stuff overall, Added to favourites.

Score: 8

"Nice, but short."

submission: =FLOW=

date: March 4, 2008

I liked this a lot more than most random line FBF's - mostly because you added in the glow effect behind the lines, which made it look a lot more interesting than just plain lines. It just goes to show how a little bit more effort can really improve a flash.

As for the length of the submission, it could have been longer, and I was actually disappointed when it ended slightly prematurely, because I wanted to see more. Maybe your next one could be a bit longer, with different colored glowing lines, and more of them at once making some more complex figures and shapes?

My friend experimented with 'drawing with light', which involved setting up a camera outside in the dark, and 'drawing' with a torch in the air using a 5 second shutter delay (I think that's the correct terminology - I'm not a photographer). Anyway, the results were quite spectacular, so perhaps something like that could inspire you as well for something really new and different.

Score: 8

"Happy Censorship day you trucking bricks!"

submission: Happy Censorship Day!

date: February 17, 2008

My favourite part was where Bahamut started listing off swear words, which were inevitably replaced with regular words by the censorship remote, and the tranquil setting of the park (I assume it was a park due to the park bench in the background) highlighted the lack of obscenity on this glorious day. And of course, Graham is always classic.