you could do more with this though. why not try expanding this? keep going!
it was good, the only thing i would say is that adding lyrics (like you mentioned) would probably improve this song tenfold. keep going!
Thanks for the nice reviews! I'll work on eventual lyrics when I have time. Good news, I've already the chorus... :-P Stay turned for the next songs!!!
i liked it
i've been reading a few of your previous reviews for this audio submission, and you don't half get a bunch of arses writing reviews... "no musical talent" "this is the audio portal not the music portal"... guess this is what you have to put up with when you're the featured author on the audio portal :)
anyway, more to the point, even though it was short, i liked it... and by the way, you ARE musically talented, but you already know that :P
Hey, thanks. That cheers me up a little.
Some of these dicks couldn't write music to save their lives.
This was one of my half-arsed pieces of music btw, I couldn't think of anything else to add other than the short "Mission complete" riff at the end.
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